Revisons

Some feed back that I got from the viewers of our film draft, would be that the ending was kind of confusing. The fact that, the two main characters started to pretend to be spies, and roll around on he floor was funny, however we need to have a reason behind it. After discussing it with group members, we believe that there could be many different ways we could go about the meaning of the scene. We could make it like Robin hood. They are stealing, and giving to the poor. Or they are just trying to figure out a escape plan to get away from the cops. The final revision to this scene has not been decided yet, but we are still working on it. After watching other films in the class, we realized that we forgot to open the movie with a title, and we forgot to put end credits in. So that will definitely be added to the film, when fixing it up. On top of the credits, we will try to add in some cool, music in the background, that will add to the mood of the movie. Another revision, that can be added to the film, is the editing. when the there is a switch to  new scene in the film, there could be a different kind of transition. Adding these little critiques can make the film a whole lot more professional and realistic.